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剑19-1小

This line graph illustrates the participants' data for various activities at a social center in Melbourne, Australia, from 2000 to 2020. The center offers five distinct activities. Over this period, there has been a notable increase in participation in table tennis and musical performances, a concerning decline in amateur dramatics, and a less clear trend for the film club and martial arts.

The data for table tennis was about 16 in 2000; it increased a bit to 20 in 2005, and this data was maintained until 2010. After that, the number of participants in table tennis saw a significant increase, surpassing martial arts in 2015 and becoming the second most popular activity. It reached about 54 in 2020, marking a substantial growth in its participation.

Overall, different kinds of activities show different trends from 2000 to 2020, and the film club data keep it as the highest data of these activities during this period.

OG p114 Letter

Dear Sir or Madam,
I have rented a four-bedroom house from your estate agency. Now I have some requests.
Recently, I found there problems with this house need fixing. There is a hole in the wall. I think maybe it was made by a mouse. Besides, the windows of the living room are also broken because of the storm last week. So I need some help. I hope you can come here someday as soon as possible to fix the problems. The hole needs to be fixed, and the windows need to be replaced.
Moreover, this house is also expensive for me. Nowadays I am still a student, and it is not good to ask for a lot of money from my parents. So I want to find another student to share the spare bedroom of the house. If you can help me to find that person, it will be better.
Yours sincerely,
Max

OG p317 Letter

This bar chart illustrates the data of rentals and sales of different movies from a shop annually from 2002 to 2011. In this period, different types show different trends. The number of type “rentals” and “VHS sales” decreased and type”Blu-ray sales” increased, but the data of “DVD sales” did not show a clear trend.
In 2002, the highest data was the type “rentals” at about 185000. It decreased continuously to around 57000 in 2011. Besides, the type “VHS sales” showed a similar trend. It was about 84000 in 2002, and decreased to about 11000 in 2005. After that, we can not find any data about it.
Blu-ray is a new type of disc, so the data of “Blu-ray sales” started from around 2000 in year 2007, and it increased smoothly to about 13000 in 2011.
At first, the data of “DVD sales” increased from 47000 to about 213000 between 2002 to 2007, and decreased to 179000 in 2011.
Overall, we can also see that the number of “DVD sales” was the highest format from the year 2005 to 2011.

OG p333 Bar Chart

This bar chart illustrates the annual data of rentals and sales of different movies from a shop from 2002 to 2011. During this period, different types show different trends. The number of “rentals” and “VHS sales” decreased and “Blu-ray sales” increased, but the data of “DVD sales” did not show a clear trend.
In 2002, the highest data was the “rentals” at about 185,000. It decreased continuously to around 57,000 in 2011. Besides, the “VHS sales” showed a similar trend. It was about 84,000 in 2002 and decreased to about 11,000 in 2005. After that, we can not find any data about it.
Blu-ray is a new type of disc, so the data on “Blu-ray sales” started around 2,000 in 2007 and increased smoothly to about 13,000 in 2011.
At first, the data of “DVD sales” increased from 47,000 to about 213,000 between 2002 and 2007, but decreased to 179,000 in 2011.
Overall, we can also see that “DVD sales” was the highest format from 2005 to 2011.

范文
The bar chart illustrates the annual number of rentals and sales of films (in VHS, DVD, and Blu-ray formats) from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.
Overall, the store saw a significant shift in the popularity of different film formats over the years. VHS sales declined rapidly, while DVD sales initially increased before gradually decreasing. Blu-ray sales appeared only in the later years, and film rentals steadily declined.
In 2002, VHS sales were still relatively high, at approximately 80,000 units, but this figure quickly dropped over the next two years, and VHS disappeared entirely by 2005. In contrast, DVD sales began at around 50,000 in 2002 and experienced a sharp rise, peaking at nearly 220,000 in 2007, before starting to decline.
Rentals, which started at about 180,000 in 2002, followed a downward trend, gradually falling to just over 50,000 by 2011. Blu-ray sales began in 2007 with low figures but grew slightly to around 10,000 by 2011.
In conclusion, the data shows a shift from VHS to DVDs, a growing presence of Blu-ray sales, and a consistent drop in film rentals.

OG p300 Letter

Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Max. I want to do some unpaid work at the local hospital at my spare time.
I am glad to a work at hospital. I know this work is an unpaid work, but I like to help others. When I was young, I was helped by many people in several events. Nowadays, I want to give back the love to the society, that’s why I want to join in.
Now I am studying finance courses at the business school at the local university, so I think I can help to some work at front desk. I can help guiding the patients to the correct part of the hospital.
In the term I study a full-day course, so I am available at every Sunday afternoon because I need to complete my homework every week at first. Besides, I can work in the next summer vacation everyday.
Yours sincerely,
Max

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Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Max. I want to do some unpaid work in my spare time at the local hospital.
I am glad to work at the hospital. I know this work is unpaid, but I like to help others. When I was young, I was helped by many people in several situations. Nowadays, I want to give back my love to the community, so (that is why) I want to join in.
Now I am studying finance courses at the business school of the local university, so I can help with financial work. Besides, I can also do some triage work and guide the patients to the correct part of the hospital.
In the term, I study a full-day course, so I am available every Sunday afternoon because I need to complete my homework every week at first. Besides, I can work every day during the following summer vacation.
Yours sincerely,
Max

剑19-1大

Nowadays, some people continue discussing whether competition or cooperation is better at work, at school, or in their daily lives. It is a heated discussion, and people have different answers. In my opinion, I think cooperating more is better.

Cooperating can bring more good things to daily life, rather than competing against each other. Firstly, if there is a team challenge, cooperation can make it easier. If everyone works alone, he may not be able to solve all the problems. Cooperation can show one's strength and hide one's weakness. In this way, everyone can show their uniqueness and benefit from overcoming difficulties.

Moreover, cooperating can also benefit each one. When solving a question together, everyone can learn from others. Thus, they gathered precious experiences and skills. In addition, The cooperation they deed will become a module that helps the team to handle familiar problems. The next time they face the same question, they will have more people to give the solution.

Competition also has some advantages. If the competition is combined with the award, people may be encouraged by it and try their best to get it. For example, students in China always face lots of competition every day, and they have to challenge themselves all the time, so they can often spare no effort to study.

Therefore, although competition at work, at school, and in daily life has advantages, more cooperation can benefit everyone, make their life easier, solve problems more effectively, and show more harmony in the world.